Monday, November 16, 2009

Warscribe Pages 9-11 (NaNoWriMo)

Ian wandered down the direction Korb pointed and it wasn’t long before he arrived at what must have been the most ruckus area of the camp. A series of large open tents where food was served had been arranged to make a courtyard area with tables and benches. While waiting in line, Ian observed the soldiers. Most of them seemed to be having a rowdy time for themselves, conversing loudly and laughing. He was given a tin tray with a hard biscuit and a scoop of mash with gravy. Ian found a half empty table and sat on its edge by himself. The biscuit was about as he expected and reminded him of biting into a chunk of iron. The mash was slightly better and he spent most of his meal softening his biscuit bit by bit in it.

There was triumphant yell at the other side of the mess. Ian turned just in time to see a raven haired woman slam her opponent’s arm down to the table. A small crowd of soldiers was gathered around them, most of whom were now grimacing and covering their faces in despair. He noticed that though the rest of the soldiers wore simple uniform of blue tunics and pants, she had on a thick navy jacket with yellow trimming. Ian shifted slightly over towards the soldiers sitting at his table and cleared his throat to get their attention. He pointed at the woman and asked, “Excuse me, but who is that?”

They shot Ian strange glances before a freckled lad finally spoke up, “You must be new then? That’s Lieutenant Renata, she’s Aegisgarde.”

He looked back to see her opponent sorrowfully push a small stack of coins towards her as she raised her arms in triumph. “I see.”

“I wouldn’t go out of my way to trouble her if I were you. Those Aegisgarde are tough bastards.” Ian nodded in response. Reasoning that he would have plenty of time to get to know the Aegisgarde in the future he got up and headed back to Mikhail’s tent.

“How was your meal?” asked Mikhail as Ian pulled back the flap to his tent.

“It was fine,” Ian replied.

Mikhail scoffed from his bed. “Nonsense. The food here is terrible.”

Ian smiled and agreed, “It was pretty bad. I saw one of the Aegisgarde at the mess. Renata I think her name was.”

Mikhail began to chuckle. “Been showing up the younger soldiers again has she?” A coughing fit cut him off. Ian poured Mikhail a glass of water from a pitcher by his bed which he took gratefully. “She’s trouble, that one,” he remarked, his tone held a bit of warmth. He took a few sips. “You should begin your study.”

Ian flipped through the pages. “I’m not even sure where to begin.”

“Perhaps you should tell me what you know about the Aeigisgarde already,” Mikhail said.

“Just what everyone else knows. They are the elite cadre of the Alban army.” He picked up Mikhail’s unfinished blade. It was a magnitude larger than any sword Ian had ever seen and he had to put his weight into even hefting it off the workbench. Runes about the size of a palm were etched into the blade, deep enough to be easily seen. They held an almost delicate quality to them. “It’s a wonder how any of them can wield these.”

“That has to do with the runes,” Mikhail explained. “You must understand, they have their own rules. Each rune has to be a certain depth and distance from each other. It all must be just so or it will not carry the effect you desire.”

Tuesday, November 10, 2009

Warscribe Pages 5-9 (NaNoWriMo)

He raised an eyebrow. “Surely an ordinary blacksmith cannot be uncommon for you to find?”

“No, but an ordinary blacksmith is not what we require.” Sergeant Petrov led Ian to tent the size of a small room. Pulling the flap open, Ian immediately saw a man lying in a cot at the other end. “Mr. Vlasek, I would like you to meet Mikhail.” Ian entered the tent, followed by Petrov. Mikhail was an elder man, though Ian could not tell if Mikhail was older than him. Some sickness had made Mikhail’s features stretched and pale.

“Ah, Sergeant Petrov. Am I to meet my replacement after all?” Mikhail turned his face towards the two of them slowly before descending into a coughing fit.

“It is with my hope, old friend.”

“Ian Vlasek, sir,” he said, nodding.

“What has the sergeant told you Ian?”

“Dreadfully little, I’m afraid.”

Mikhail winced. “You would make a dying man waste time explaining matters, sergeant? Bastard.” He cleared his throat. “Very well. As you can see, I am dying. Over by the door you will find my workbench. On it is my last work that I have left incomplete.” Ian looked back and found a large sword lying on a small wooden bench, turned into a makeshift table. Symbols lined the blade, leading up from the hilt. The symbols ended halfway up the sword. A hammer and chisel lay by its side. “You must complete my work Ian. And hopefully a great many more.”

Ian swallowed. “This is an Aegisguarde sword, isn’t it?”

“It will be when it is finished,” answered the sergeant. “Do you understand why you are here now? Listen to me, I know this is an unorthodox situation, but I know what you are thinking. A new ‘scribe should have been sent to us from the capital. But, here is what you do not know nor have we told anyone in your city. We are cut off from the capital.”

Ian widened his eyes. “They have come this far?”

“Yes. And with Mikhail here unable to work, we are unable to utilize the Empire’s greatest weapon to reopen the passes. We need you to learn this new trade and make us more Aegis weapons and armor. Do you understand what is needed of you?”

Ian nodded.

“Good then. Are you ready?”

“In all honesty, sir? No.”

Petrov nodded. “I would have been surprised if you were. But needs what may. I’ll leave the two of you to get acquainted.” He let himself out of the tent.

Mikhail directed Ian to a thick, old book at the foot of the cot. Within were worn pages scrawled with a multitude of symbols in black ink. Each had at least a full paragraph of notations on their purpose and use.

“You must memorize that book,” Mikhail explained. “It matters not if you understand the words now. You will need that knocking about in your head for any hope to understand what will be to come.”

“I see.” Ian flipped through the book, running his fingers over the pages but being careful not to touch them. “How long it take you to learn this craft?”

Mikhail raised an eyebrow. After a moment of thought, he chuckled and settled on saying, “More time than you have.”

With his eyes still buried in the pages of the book, Ian asked, “I see.”

Mikhail waved dismissively. “Go to the mess tent and find yourself something to eat for now, we can begin your tutelage afterwards.”

Ian nodded and set the book down. “What about you? Should I bring you something or…?”

“Sergeant Petrov will have something arranged for me.” He descended into a coughing fit. Clearing his throat, he added, “It’s become something of a punishment for the junior officers, heh.”

Ian nodded and left the tent. It wasn’t until he was outside before he realized he did not know where the mess tent was and the idea of going back in to ask did not seem becoming of his new position. He picked a direction and began to walk, hoping that when he found a large enough gathering of people he would be in the right place.

Following the sounds of the camp did little to guide Ian. Everywhere around him soldiers and laborers were busy tearing tents down or putting tents up. A familiar clatter of metal on metal brought him to a smithing workshop where he felt an odd comfort.

One of the blacksmiths looked up from his work towards Ian. “Something I can help you with?”

“How much carbon do you use in your metal?” asked Ian.

“Oh, a metalworker are you?”

“Mostly tools, pots and pans.” He shrugged. “Swords once in a while for the city guard.”

The smith took off a work glove and extended a hand towards Ian. They shook. “Good to meet you, friend. My name is Korbova, call me Korb. I assume you are here to work for the army?”

“Yes, but not in the smithy. I was going to ask for directions to the mess tent.”

Korb winced. “Don’t tell me they have you working in there. That would be a waste of your ability, and we could certainly use your help here.”

“No—ahh.” Ian paused and wondered how much he should be talking about his new job. “They brought me in to work with Mikhail.”

“M-Mikhail?” His eyes widened and he withdrew his hand slowly from Ian’s. “I didn’t know. The tent you are looking for is down that way. Forgive me for my impertinence.”

“I was not offended.”

“Thank you, sir. If you will excuse me, I have to get back to my work.” Korb went back to his anvil where he picked up a pair of tongs holding a piece of metal. He brought it to a forge and plunged the end of the metal into the fire. Ian noticed that Korb ceased to look back in his eyes after he mentioned he was working for Mikhail.

Rats Project


Down on his luck, looking for some quick cash.

Didn't spend as much time on this one. T_T

Wednesday, November 4, 2009

Pirate Booty


Random Prop sketches for upcoming project.

Tuesday, November 3, 2009

Warscribe Pages 1-5 (NaNoWriMo)

The rain fell on Ian Vlasek with disregard to the growing knot of desperation in his stomach as he ran through the boot sucking mud of the city streets. The office of the local regiment loomed into focus. He threw open the door. Those within turned their heads towards him, seemingly started by the gaunt older man with thinning hair standing in their doorway and dripping on the floor. Ian bellowed, “Where is my son!?” He stalked through the office paying no heed to the soldiers which began to gather at the commotion. Coming upon a row of young recruits standing before a soldier, one of them locked eyes with Ian and grimaced.

“Father,” he muttered.

“You!” Ian held up a near disintegrated piece of wet paper streaked with what looked like ink stains. “What is the meaning of this, Nicholas?”

“It’s my choice,” Nicholas fired back. “It is what I want!”

“You don’t know what you want!”

“Enough!” The voice of what looked to be the chief amongst the soldiers echoed through the halls. “Sir, perhaps we can better discuss the reasons you are here in my private office?” The fire in Ian’s blood settled and he at once felt the cold of the rains chilling him to the bone. Ian nodded.

Soon, Ian and Nicholas were sitting across the desk of the Chief Recruitment Officer. “Sir, if I am to understand correctly, your son has chosen to enlist himself in the army.”

Ian took a deep breath. “My son, though I love him so, can be a fool at times.” At this Nicholas bristled in his chair but said nothing. “He thinks this is what he wants, but it is not so.”

“That’s not true father!” Nicholas started and swiftly stopped as the officer held up a hand.

“Be that as it may, we have your son’s papers and signature. He is ours now.” The officer clasped his hands together over his desk.

Ian shook his head. “I cannot allow this to happen.”

“Do you not find honor in serving the Empire Mr. Vlasek?” The officer’s eyes narrowed. “You should be proud!”

“I know, sir. It is just-” Ian turned to look at his son. “I cannot bear to lose him.” He looked up at the officer. “Take me. Take me in his place.”

“Father!”

“If even what you ask were possible, why would we do such a thing Mr. Vlasek?”

“I—I don’t know. There must be something I can do. My son is young, he is barely a man. Let him serve the Empire in some other way.”

“Father, no!” The officer raised his hand again.

“Tell me Mr. Vlasek, what is your occupation?”

“I am a bookkeeper.”

“I see. Good with numbers and figures then?”

“That is my job. Sir.”

The officer tapped his fingers on the desk. “Perhaps there is a use we can find for you after all. Nicholas, return to your home.”

“Sir? What is the meaning of this?” Nicholas looked incredulous. Ian covered his son’s hand with this own.

“Please Nicholas.” He turned to the officer. “Can I have a word with my son, please?”

“You have two minutes.” He gestured towards the door for the father and son.

Outside, the pair stood as the rain began to die. Nicholas looked at his father with a disbelief, too surprised to be angry. They stood in silence for a moment before he asked, “Why father? This was my choice to make.”

Ian shook his head. “My son. I only hope I haven’t made a mistake for the both of us. If time passes and your head clears and you still wish to make the same decision, then so be it. But, I think I know you well enough by now.”

“How will you survive?”

“I have lived my life. There are other ways for you to serve the Empire. Make up with Natalie or find another that will make you happy. Grow old and have many children of your own.” Nicholas looked away, ashamed at his transparent motivations. Ian placed a hand on his son’s shoulder. “Go home and tell your mother and sister that I will return if I can. Our time is up.” Ian turned and walked back into the office, leaving his life behind.

Ian along with the rest of the recruits set out soon after. They traveled by wagon towards a camp on the outskirts of the city. He watched the little darkness of his home on the horizon fade out of view. The other recruits cast sidewise glances towards Ian but no one said anything. He spent the trip looking down at his hands and rubbing them together. They were rough and lined with time. Ian could not fathom that his hands could soon hold a sword when they had spent most of his life holding paper and pen, that his body, already beginning to sore from the ride, would be placed in combat.

They came to the camp late in the day. It was a large collection of tents and wooden buildings dug into the hard ground. The tents were massive, some were of equal size to the buildings back home and looked to be makeshift halls than tents. Ian reasoned that this was a semi-permanent training ground. There were already soldiers exercising in formation on the field. The caravan of wagons came to a stop and the recruits filed out. A sergeant came by to examine them and to put them in order. Ian fell in with the other recruits.

“I am Sergeant Petrov,” he began. He barely raised his voice and yet it carried down the line. “Welcome to the glory of the Alban Empire. The life you knew is gone. My advice to you now is to put it into a safe, dark place and not look at it until your service is over.” He placed his hands on his hip. “Now, you are mine.” He gestured into the camp. “You will find tent marked by three red stripes. It will be your home for the coming months. Go and get yourself situated. Supper is in fifteen minutes. Now fall out.” The line began to move. Ian started to follow the man in front of him but the Sergeant pulled him out of the line. “You, come with me.” The sergeant began to walk, forcing Ian to catch up to him. “I understand there was a bit of an incident in your recruitment.”

“Incident, sir? No incident. I am here to do my duty.”

“Hm, duty as a father, yes? No matter. All I need to know is whether you are prepared to follow orders.” Petrov swung around to face Ian. “Will you do as you are told?”

Ian stood as straight and firm as he could manage. “Yes sir, I will.”

“Good.” Petrov continued to walk. “Now, you may have gathered that you’re not here to be a soldier.”

“I was surprised I was accepted in my son’s place, yes.”

“Normally we would not have made the exchange, but your background has apparently inspired my subordinate to send you instead.”

He raised an eyebrow. “You want me because I can work with numbers?”

Sergeant Petrov led Ian to a small meeting hall. As he pulled the flap of the tent away they caught the attention of a small circle of people sitting at one of the tables in the center. There was a tall, dark-skinned man with faded soot stains on his face, a pair of studious looking older gentlemen in long coats, and a young woman with strong eyes in a soldier’s blue uniform. The sergeant led Ian to them and he saw that the group had been studying a number of papers spread out on the desk. The papers had been scrawled with large symbols that Ian didn’t recognize and notes detailing them.

“Mr. Vlasek, do you recognize any of these symbols?” Sergeant Petrov waved his hand across the papers.

Ian leaned down to examine them. “No, sir.”

“Have you heard of the Hotekin and their sorcerers?”

“Only that we are at war with them, but I don’t see how I-”

Petrov held up a hand and nodded. “The reason you are here, Mr. Vlasek, is to work with these people. I want you to help figure out the Hotekin’s magics. And, whether we can use it for ourselves.”

Wednesday, October 28, 2009

Pretentury of the Century

Kris Hattori
CTCS 502
Professor Kase

He Would Always Have Been Isak Borg, Ingmar Bergman

While Ingmar Bergman's Wild Strawberries (1957) is a film that largely embraces the personal, there are clear links to religion and Swedish nationalism that resonate throughout it. I believe that these three categories can never be fully segregated from each other despite an auteur’s intention to create a film that focuses on one. Bordwell hints at why this may be true. He explains that the competent art film viewer, "...watches the film expecting not order in the narrative but stylistic signatures in the narration: technical touches and obsessive motifs (Bergman's character names) (Bordwell 59)."

When viewing an art film, one can make the concession that even the most infinitesimal details can betray authorial marks. Because of this, I believe that a film must be looked at in terms of quantitative and qualitative patterns in order to discern the differences between conscious decisions, unconscious decisions, and simple happenstance.

At one level, the film is a narrative about one man who is able to relieve some of the loneliness in his life by taking both a physical and mental journey. Examining the film at an authorial level, it is the work of Ingmar Bergman, who wrote the screenplay after taking his own road trip to a town from his youth and toying with the idea of the past and present merging. He elaborates, "The film was based on my experiences during that trip to Uppsala. It was all as simple, concrete, and tangible as that. And I had no difficulty at all in carrying it through (146)."
His choices in the film, both formal and narrative are distinctly his own. He asserts that one of the film's most iconic scenes, the dream sequence in which the protagonist, Isak Borg (Victor Sjöström), walks down a street and encounters a hearse and his own living corpse, is based on a recurring dream that he had been having at the time. The scene is brightly lit, imagery is hauntingly alien, and sound design is disorienting. Bergman has created a scene that is distinctly personal art in both content and formal execution.

From the film’s introduction, we see Borg pause to make a move on a chessboard and dismiss it with a grunt. This simple interaction places the chessboard’s importance over many of the other props in the movie. It seems to be a nod to The Seventh Seal, a Bergman film that immediately preceded Wild Strawberries, in which death himself commanded the game. In the dream sequence, Borg encounters a clock with no hands that looms overhead. While these are simply props, I believe that they indicate that there is a threshold that a particular element of a movie must meet based on importance or distinctiveness before registering it into one of the three categories. As is the case with the handless clock (clocks and time being recurring motifs in Bergman’s work), this distinctiveness can operate across an auteur's films.

The reflections of the personal resonate more heavily through Wild Strawberries than its representation of the ideological or national. Borg even shares the same initials as Bergman. The odds that this would happen by chance are one in 676. When an interviewer questioned Bergman about the decision, he responded that it was an "innocent coincidence (Björkman 146)"—a response that seems about as coy as The Beatles insisting that “Lucy in the Sky with Diamonds” was not about LSD, especially when one considers the sheer amount of autobiographical content within the film.

RELIGIOUS IMPLICATIONS
Many critics like to point to the ideological implications within the film, often citing Bergman's own Father, a Lutheran minister and strict disciplinarian as a reason for this. When asked about how conscious he was about including Catholic implications within Wild Strawberries, he simply replied, "Not at all (Björkman 146)." Despite this, it is hard to ignore the quantity and specificity of formal and symbolic elements in Wild Strawberries that can be read as distinctly religious.

Borg and his daughter in law, Marianne (Ingrid Thulin), meet with university students Sara (Bibi Andersson), Viktor (Björn Bjelfvenstam), and Anders (Folke Sundquist). The group takes a lunch outdoors where Viktor, a rationalist doctor to be, and Anders, a theologian and future Lutheran minister, argue the merits of religion and rationality. They exchange clichés such as “religion is the opiate of the masses.” Unable to settle their differences, they both implore the wise Borg for an opinion, which he deflects by reciting a hymn rather than answering. This lack of concern seems to mirror Bergman’s own thoughts on the issue—that he would simply like that his own message. In this case it is likely that Borg’s own thoughts stray towards reconciliation with his father (Törnqvist 127).

Eventually, Viktor and Anders' differences erupt into a shoving match that Borg and Sara watch from the car, amused. The short fight is filmed at a long range, leaving the viewer simply as a spectator. It lacks the intensity and involvement that close ups and fast cutting between the two combatants would bring to the viewer. Thus Bergman uses formal methods to transform the fight between two friends into a controlled exhibition of levity. Here Bergman uses them as a way of infantilizing an argument between religion and rationalism through allegory. Their sophomoric debate and one dimensional natures make them decidedly impersonal characters. In neither of the two encounters between Viktor and Anders does one gain a clear upper hand on the other.

The origin of obvious visual symbolism such as the stigmata Borg receives by puncturing himself on the nail is hard to deny; however, the recurring themes of mortality, confession, and redemption can easily be said to transcend religious dogma. Dissecting the ideological from the personal becomes problematic at this point due to Bergman’s own relationship to Lutheran Protestantism. Perhaps the ideology has shaped so much of him during his formative years that his decisions are unconscious. This could account for the heavy religious implications throughout the film which oscillate with the lighthearted banter between Viktor and Anders. Although Bergman admits that there is a general religiosity to the film, even this seems to be a concession that he makes only to appease his critics.

SWEDISH NATIONALISM
In the first flashback to Borg’s past, the viewer is greeted with a stylized depiction of the Swedish bourgeoisie. From the color of the walls, appliances, and clothing of Borg’s family to the sunlight pouring into the room, everything is white on white. French argues that the idyllic imagery is taken from the iconic works of Swedish designer, Carl Larsson (French 53). As Sara becomes torn between Borg and his brother, she retreats into a darkened hall. Shadows creep over her face as she confesses her turmoil. It is here that Bergman breaks the façade of this Swedish ideal and subverts the iconic Swedish imagery in order to serve his own narrative.

The structure of the Swedish educational system provides Bergman with a framework for the film's narrative. It is the catalyst for Borg’s need to travel and allows him to hold a place of reverence amongst the three students. Although Bergman engineers the simplistic dichotomy between Anders and Viktor, it does not appear as though this is his indictment of a poor educational system or of the Swedish youth. Bergman admits that while he had attempted to make the three students representative of the Swedish youth, they are a weakness of the film. Bergman recalled "Even at this time the image was utterly outdated (Björkman 147)." The simplistic nature of the trio is often attributed to Bergman’s own disconnect with the age group.

DEMARCATION
What we see occurring most often in Wild Strawberries is an overlapping between the personal and the ideological and an overlapping between the personal and the national. Bergman explains, "I'm a radar set. I pick up one thing or another and reflect it back in mirrored form, all jumbled up with memories, dreams, and ideas (Björkman 18)." He seems to hint the impossibility of absorbing and redistributing ideas of nationalism or ideology without coloring them with one's own experiences.

This becomes one of the most problematic aspects of quantifying a film, its scenes, or even its stills as providing meaning discretely in a single register or representation. It seems that while a filmmaker can intend, at least consciously, to create scenes that register as being personal, ideological, or national, there are levels of the unconscious that can speak volumes to viewers. Bergman describes wrestling with the conscious and unconscious.

Bergman explains:
All the time a film is being made, one flinches away from marginal thinking. If I relyin on my intuition I know it will lead me in the right direction…If I begin hesitating and discussing, I get so tangled up in personal complications and become so crudely aware of what it really is I’m depicting, I can’t go on…Obviously I was perfectly well aware from the outset, on the other hand, that Engineer Ahlman and his wife are a scurrilous portrait of Stig Ahlgren and his wife (Björkman 140).

Bergman himself later becomes an unreliable source to his own film as he stated that his admission that Isak Borg was portrayal of himself as “a tired, old egocentric, who’d cut himself off from everything around him—as I had done (Ruuth 22),” as being false. Bergman’s own indecision points at the reality that one cannot separate the personal, ideological, or national within a film. It is up to the viewer and the critic to set the threshold for qualifying these elements as such.



Bibliography
Björkman, S et al (1973). Bergman on Bergman. New York, NY: Simon and Schuster.
Bordwell, D (1979). The Art Cinema as a Mode of Film Practice. Film Criticism, 4(1), 56-64.
French, K & French, P (1995). Wild Strawberries. South Bank, Waterloo: BFI Publishing.
Ruuth, M (1994). Images. Bloomsbury, London: Bloomsbury Publishing.
Törnqvist, E (1995). Between Stage and Screen: Ingmar Bergman Directs. Amsterdam, Netherlands: Amsterdam University Press.